First conditional chain story

Dear students, now that we have reviewed the first conditional we are ready to complete the next task.

Task and Respond Due date: March 1st / 2015  Time: 16H59

Task: Write your real chain story in five sentences using the first conditional tense.
                        How do you write a Chain Story? There are many examples in the web.

        Example:
                   If I am sick, I will go to the doctor.
                   If I go to the doctor, I won´t go to school.
                   If I don´t go to school, my teacher will be mad.
                   If my teacher is mad, she will send me tons of homework.
                   If she sends me tons of homework, I will get sick again.

Respond:  1. Rewrite one story written by a classmate using the third person (he, she or they). Replace the pronoun "I" for her or his real name.
                       2. Write a short constructive comment on your classmate story. If the story has mistakes please make the necessary corrections.
                      Example:

                            Elena your work is excellent! The first conditional is used appropriately in a very creative way.

                                            If Elena is sick, she will go to the doctor.
                                            If Elena goes to the doctor, she won´t go to school.
                                            If Elena doesn´t go to school, her teacher will be mad.
                                            If her teacher is mad, she will send her tons of homework.
                                            If the teacher sends her tons of homework, she will get sick again.

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Hi Teacher,
After checking the task I explored on the web to find the information, at the same time I read the rubric to be sure I can get the best grade

Hello friends, here it is my story, I hope you like it. Any comment will be welcomed.

If I drive my car on friday afternoon, I will get upset because of the trafic.
If I get upset because of the trafic, I will have crash a car.
If I crash a car, I will spend a lot of money
If I spent a lot of money. I wont buy the new shoes to my child
If I do not buy the new shoes to my child. I will be sad

Very good work Samary. You shine!

I´m going to make some little corrections, if somebody does not agree please let me know.

If I drive my car on Friday afternoon, I will get upset because of the traffic.
If I get upset because of the trafic, I will have crash a car.
If I crash a car, I will spend a lot of money.
If I spent spend a lot of money, I wont buy the new shoes for my child.
If I do not buy the new shoes for my child, I will be sad.

Interesting activity

If I study hard, I will pass the test

I going to use this activity my next class